=O That is awesomely beautiful. Written very well. That Old English they speak in must be a terror to write. Then again, you're the one who walks around with those dorky black t-shirts. ^__^

I loved that Horatio was the quiet boy at first but later you reveal that streak of mettle deep in his nature that will later come to be Hamlet's best support. Haha. I love that you're writing this and am very interested to see where you'll take it.